Post-Presentation Changes

An element of my work that I was told to improve following my presentation was my orthographic drawings. I was told that for my plan drawing I needed to include the paved, water area that is outside my viewing room. 

I have done this and rendered it on the computer as close to the original that I could muster. It turned out as follows: 

*Note the teal lines on the close up screen shots are guides in order to make sure that my paved out door section drawing lined up with my plan drawing.